Friday, November 30, 2012

coronary conduct by Sarah Lariviere

rewording of Jennifer K. Dick's "Where These Two Sides Meet," which reworded Erin Mouré’s “Coronal Bone Suture”

but NO wanting Wanting

wanting but NO physicality I thought, holding out

  to                                           (for)

    drawings with indications

   of Style
  of Saturn's sabbath



               (get up... 
                              get up)

Where these two sides meet, by JKD

Rewording of Erin Mouré’s “Coronal Bone Suture”—as a rescrambling of the original + small additions. Published in the now-available Lana Turner lit review, issue #5: http://www.lanaturnerjournal.com/toc-override/erin-moure-coronal-bone-suture

“I am a rabbit
wanting
in
physicality’s memory
my treasure
you,” I told her.

“But no!,” she retorted
“Words are beings
sutured.”

Sustenance abjured
this glance
stretched frontal
spacing
one comma between
each
of us.

Wanting that
pirate,
I thought, holding
out to            (for) 
her
this dismay.