Wednesday, November 21, 2007

CRAVING by Jennifer k Dick

After "In the Rush" by Jonathon Wonhom

pressed against the sky

.................................air-stung

..................................................ravenous



2 comments:

Amanda Deutch said...

hmm I really dig this. wow interesting to see shorter poems from you. captures a lot and leaves room for breathing and exploration

Jennifer K Dick said...

Hey Amanda
All the credit really goes to the wonderful language of Jon. This poem is just a few words sieved from his poem! But I did go to a reading by Rufo Q the night I did this "sieve" reword and it made me think about trying to work in smaller spaces. After all, Rufo does that SO beautifully! Best, J